All Comments on 'Bluepilled Ch. 07'

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apocolypse101apocolypse101about 4 years ago

I'm frustrated at the loss of control that Charles has experienced, but I really enjoy the idea of a super-bimbo Mia, assuming she gets some of her mind back.

newfield1981newfield1981about 4 years ago
The plot thickens!

A Rose by any other name......

petmyheadpetmyheadabout 4 years agoAuthor
Thanks for reading!

I hope everyone enjoyed, go ahead and leave a rating if you like, the fives really help out. This story was a blast to work on, and it's my longest piece to date. Next month is the big finale, and I think it goes further than any other chapter!

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

I would like to see charles regain control in the end, but other than that it's been a great story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Finally....

...this douchenozzle gets his comeuppance!

If only Rose wasn't just as bad.

With nobody to root for, one can only hope they both have sex again and both die from simultaneous heart attacks or aneurysms.

Marklynda2Marklynda2about 1 year ago

Pride cometh before the fall. Another well thought out and written chapter. I look forward to reading the final one to see if Charles can ultimately defeat Rose. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

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