by TattooedPup
I like the transformation and the charity idea. I'm looking forward to more transformations for charity
Fun little self contained story. I can tell English isn't your first language, but the mistakes weren't a big deal.
I loved the idea and the story is nice, but I have a couple of suggestions:
- Use some kind of tool to check grammar and spelling. I am also a non-native speaker and I assure you that there are free programs that can help you improve a lot more than you would give them credit for.
- The process of the protagonist accepting her new self seems too fast and automatic. Part of the allure of the genre, at least for me, is what happens after the transformation itself.
I love those type of stories. Please add one per week.
When I read this story I was so fascinated by it that now I'm turning into a fox too. I have already modified my ears and now I have half of my body red, calmly I will finish it this year. I'd love to read more stories like this one. Heartfelt thanks TattooedPup
super fun i wish there was this kind of thing but people have to pay a fortune for this much work
Can't wait to see more and more body modofication like this one! Tattooedpup I love you!