All Comments on 'Bodyswapped: The Dive Bar'

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MigbirdMigbird7 months ago

The “body swap” scenario is great fun and this piece well done — short but did not feel that way; detailed enough, humorous/good dialogue. Oh, yes, the sex was graphically intense and so consistent with scenario, thanks for sharing your imagination.

hudson2121hudson21216 months ago

Loved it, super erotic and great writing.

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