by BobMcP352
You published five very short stories on the same day, and this is the first of your stories I've read. This isn't a complete story, but just a sex scene. It starts with them already having sex in an FFM and ends that way, too, so even the scene isn't complete with a beginning or end. There's no buildup. Who are these people to each other? You refer to Brandi in the title and tag line. Is she single and finding a couple to play with, or is she related in any way to one of the other two?
Watching your spouse or significant other in a three-some leads the reader to feel more about your characters, rather than just reading a written description of a short porn video.