All Comments on 'Brat's Replacement'

up with the best in the genre, I always admire a story like this which shows what real control is about. Very fine writing to convey such depth of feeling in so short a piece. My one question would be what caused the change in her Dom which started it all going? Is there more to follow? Cheers. -- UK CYNIC

There's more ways than to simply beat a person into submission, which is rather loutish and unimaginative. This was a neat unique story.

I liked the story but seemed a little unfair to her when he was the one to change 1st maybe could of explained the 1st part of the story better. Made it seem like he was tired of her and that's just mean to drag her on if he was.