All Comments on 'Breaking Annie - Ch. 01'

I dream of being taken exactly like this! Powerless and at a Dominant man’s mercy to be trained as his mindless slut❤️❤️❤️

Love this so far!! Would be great to see her leave the house and run. And captor run after her and catch her. And she have a breakdown and captor comfort her and tell her that it is her house and that they will be happy together. Hope the stockhlom syndrome will be slow and that he will slowly break her

Hope that the stockhlom syndrome will be slow and she try to escape. Would be great to see her try to escape from him and get caught and punished. And after the punishment cuddling, aftercare.. 😍😍😍😍😍😍

amazing story!!!

This man isn't really a dominant. But at least the story is in the right category.

This is how I have always fantasized about being taken and transformed.

Did you read this before you posted it?

If you did then I presume you chose to ignore the consistent errors and typos that litter the prose.

‘Quickly sauntering’ was where I really switched off.

A proof reader/editor would help eliminate many of these errors if you’re not spotting them yourself.

Sorry to be harsh on your first submission but it’s a quick fix that will enormously improve future submissions