All Comments on 'Breathless Anticipation'

It's a good story with a sweet premise.

Thank you for such a well written story of lovemaking without all the drama. It was nice to have normal characters in contrast to so many other stories about Superman and Wonderwoman. Mechanics are excellent. 5 stars

The sparse details of the lovers is maddening. I don't know that I like either character at this point. I will read on. Not many comments to this story.