by MarkeySan
Not bad. Needs some editing to clean up the grammar and the unnecessary extra phrases but overall hot and sexy
Very hot and I liked the addition of the buttplug and BDSM elements . ....I think sexy Kara needs a big buttplug too!
It was a great series until the introduction of bdsm. Now it just a story about a pathetic man who only wants to lash out. The erotic nature of the story is gone.