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Click here"Nice Beemer," she said, smiling sexy at Mark as she walked.
Mark smiled back, "I should take you for a ride sometime," he said.
"Yeah," she turned and smiled, "I'd bet you could give me a good ride," she said slutty, knowing she was being a tease.
Her mom came out behind her scolding her. The girl turned and screamed, "I don't need no goddam bra!!!!" and she walked on while cussing at her mom. Mark and Ray both looked at each other. They knew what they needed to do while living way out in this small town. It was obvious someone needed to instill some discipline around here.
It lost the eroticism once it just became a free for all. Why would Mark go through the claiming of raven in the earlier chapter just to have her not even know which of them would be knocking her up. Lost any connection and any interest at that point.
Liked it until the ending. The ending was a bit jarring. Would have liked to see how the couples developed more distinctly before including more potential players.
Enjoyable series and looking forward to reading more of your stories and a more in this series.
Glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for the input. I will consider it in the future.