All Comments on 'Brian's Submission'

Brian's true mission was to take advantage of and dominate Shez and not to take care of her. Shez was smart to be cautious of meeting him, unfortunately she succumbed to her curiosity and allowed this deceiver into her home. 2 stars due to the twist of the story. I hope she can retaliate when given the opportunity and free herself from this deceptive untrustworthy male. Nothing sexy about rape. Remember he willingly submitted to her, and when given the chance he switched forcefully raped her.

I have to somewhat agree with the previous comment. The story was going along fine with her dominating him and even if it led to him dominating her without the deception I would have been ok with it. I didn’t like the fact that it leaned towards the rape factor even though you watered it down with her intense orgasms which led one to believe she was enjoying it. To me domination is fun as long as it’s consentual. I hope you work this out in the next segment because it’s a great storyline.