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by sinundermyskin

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AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Poor. Grammar all over the place and jumping from present to past tense andback for no reason.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

That was exciting!! The only change I would make is to give your partner a name. Reading name would really turn up the heat

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