All Comments on 'Broken Boy Ch. 01'

A beautifully crafted story - quite moving and involving. This reader will certainly be looking out for more chapters.

Nice story. I wish the chapters were longer. I love Shae!

Yes, I like the story. It is different from most stories. I'm very interested in where and how their friendship grows.

I'm very much looking forward to reading many more chapters of this story.

DV19

Wonderful followup to your "Broken Boy - Prologue"! It's nice to see Shae life is improving a bit with the help of good people and Adam! I wish them the best :)

beautiful read!

I love this story. It has interesting potential and I want to find out what happens with Shae and Adam. I look forward to the character development. I hope that Shae can find some happiness and increase his confidence.

beautiful beginning.

I look forward to more of their story

LOVE IT! KEEP GOING!!!!!

Beautiful beginning! More, pls!

It's sooooo cute!

- Lydia Schiavello

You have started this story beautifully, you have already given hope for an interesting, very interesting story. And in the character of Shae, I see my own experiences.

I'm looking forward to the next parts of this story.

Regards SissyBoy from Warsaw (Poland).

Pięknie rozpocząłeś tą opowieść, dałeś już teraz nadzieję na ciekawą, bardzo interesującą historię. A w postaci Shae widzę swoje własne przeżycia.

Czekam na następne części tej historii.

Pozdrawiam SissyBoy z Warszawy (Polska).

Love it!

A beautiful beginning to a wonderful story.

A nice beginning to the story. I know you're not a native English speaker so it isn't really your fault but sometimes it is hard to figure out what you're trying to say, but I can usually figure it out in a few seconds and it doesn't detract from the story that much. 4*