All Comments on 'Brother and sister first experience'

I gave it a four. It started out well but seemed almost dull / boring at times. I am glad it's a real story and not just fiction, but I wish it had been told with more intensity. For example, "her breathing changed when I" or "My heart pounded when she first exposed her." Overall, its good.

I like real stories best. I look forward to more.

It was okay right up to the end. Didn't like the fact that they turn into swingers or that he whores his sister out to a glory hole. A better ending would have been they take over fucking their mom.

Nice story, but way too many misspellings and even wrong words. Seems like bad voice recognition never got a proofreading.

I lIkeda the story, despite the shortcomings itemized by previous comments.

Proof Reading is vital. I have seen this offered by anot her commentor on literotica.com and suggest it to/for you.

Record yourself reading a story. Play the recording back while reading along. Errors will identify themselves for self correction.

I did the same with my brother, who I was awkwardly attracted to. I loved when he'd finger my pussy to orgasm. The more I looked at and felt his huge veiny penis in my hand & mouth, the more I wanted him to fuck me. We eventually did, and I always thought it was so erotic when he'd pull out and spurt his multiple spurts of warm cum all over my tits!

My sister and I had a similar experience when we were younger, we started just teasing one another until we started having amazing sex. 20 years on we’re still having amazing sex, I love shooting my cum over her face, and she goes home to her husband.