All Comments on 'Caged Pt. 02'

This is coming along really well, I’m looking forward to seeing where it leads. The was something I forgot to mention on the first chapter, the cages. Prolonged use of cages in the way you described would have serious physical and psychological impact, counter intuitive unless reserved as a short term punishment.

Tess (uk)

.... and I'm finding that I'm enjoying your general tone for the story. There is nothing wrong with going slow if you are building up to a good tension point; just dont get too lost in the details.

Good job; I'll be looking for more.

First off, I would like to say that I agree with the people before me and what they said about your work. I think this story is a very lovely and does a great job of blending reality with fantasy. I love how realistic it is with the character’s feelings and action and how you still nicely introduces a fantasy world that blends well into the background of the main characterI hope to see more of this story soon. Thank you!

Great story telling. I like the pace and the build up is tangible I look forward to more.

I like the idea of the countries opposing Dom/sub statuses