All Comments on 'Caitlin Returns Home Pt. 01'

Not sure where thus going, but I would like to know if the mother is having an affair too. It would definitely add some interest to the story.

Thank you. This is a little snapshot of an ongoing narrative between the two of us. I'll mention your comment. I appreciate it a lot.

A little back story would be nice. How did she hook up with her father? Beyond that, the story has promise.

Hi Steve, I did write another short story recently that touched on some of the past. Hopefully it's posted soon. Thanks for your note.