by McBacon
Whooop... in your biography you have the greatest author description ever!
Missing a finger on your counting hand?
Where's Chapter 3?
enjoying so far missed three a little disjointed and need five soon.
good read, though i think chapter 3 is supposed to come before ch 4... looking forward to the next installment as well as the missing previous ch.3
Posted there on a whim.
Thanks for the feedback.
I am loving how this story is progressing. Looking forward to more chapters.
Chapter 5 is in final editing. Driving Miss Gretchen
Chapter 5 - Driving Miss Gretchen - 6/28
Chapter 6 - Good Night Mommy - Friday? Saturday?
Another great chapter gotta go to the next really enjoying your writting
Caleb's fucking the Pastor's Chinese wife at the Church Dinner was Classic! I thought you were just going to have Ming give him a Blow Job, but he got that and a great fuck to go along with it! And the church women got the spillover power of the Pendant to boot! I can't imagine how Caleb is going to drive home with Gretchen and Anna without doing both of them, and still have to put out for his REALLY Hot Mom at home. Great story, well told. Thanks again.