All Comments on 'Caleb Woke Up Ch. 04'

by McBacon

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Greatest ever!

Whooop... in your biography you have the greatest author description ever!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
1... 2... 4...[?]

Missing a finger on your counting hand?

Where's Chapter 3?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
looking ahead

looking forward to 5

kplusmckplusmcalmost 12 years ago
great idea

enjoying so far missed three a little disjointed and need five soon.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

good read, though i think chapter 3 is supposed to come before ch 4... looking forward to the next installment as well as the missing previous ch.3

McBaconMcBaconalmost 12 years agoAuthor
Chapter 3 can be found in scifi fantasy

Posted there on a whim.

Thanks for the feedback.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

I am loving how this story is progressing. Looking forward to more chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
so far so good!

i cant wait for chapter 5 now!

McBaconMcBaconalmost 12 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the feedback.

Chapter 5 is in final editing. Driving Miss Gretchen

McBaconMcBaconalmost 12 years agoAuthor
Chapter 5 scheduled for 6/28. Chapter 6 is in final editing.

Chapter 5 - Driving Miss Gretchen - 6/28

Chapter 6 - Good Night Mommy - Friday? Saturday?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
like the story. incendlitaly try bbq bacon wrapped pinapple sometime. it is almost as good as ur story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Found the BACON...................................

Another great chapter gotta go to the next really enjoying your writting

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
A Great Chapter

Caleb's fucking the Pastor's Chinese wife at the Church Dinner was Classic! I thought you were just going to have Ming give him a Blow Job, but he got that and a great fuck to go along with it! And the church women got the spillover power of the Pendant to boot! I can't imagine how Caleb is going to drive home with Gretchen and Anna without doing both of them, and still have to put out for his REALLY Hot Mom at home. Great story, well told. Thanks again.

rightbankrightbankover 9 years ago
I find it hard to accept

that he is really that naïve.

TaljinnTaljinnalmost 9 years ago
Rosemary Bacon Lasagna

This is what has peaked my interest here. Hmm...

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