All Comments on 'Call Me Master Pt. 02'

Not all that erotic

chapters 1 and 2 are a little too short for my taste and it lacks background and context, but you can add it in the following chapters. I don't really care if there's erotica if the content is non con, which you achieved, it's just not so deep and too direct. I think you can improve if you keep writing, don't give up, find a beta to give advice and revise your text.

I like that it is simple and direct. It's nice sometime to just read of simple submissiveness and acceptance of the fearful situation. Non-con has lots of perspectives. But I agree you can add more complexity as you go and learn as a writer. Keep going!!