All Comments on 'Can Wife Help Him Get Promoted? Ch. 03'

by Satsumabook123

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AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Fabulous story to date and cant wait to read more of the dom/sub realtionship. Something i have been in and sooo want again if i can find an experienced black dominant guy here in UK Id love for you to write something about me or bring me into the storyline ? Im Alyson sub bi blonde wife size 14 shaved 32FF 28 36 aged 65 but look and act 45 so im told. Hubby aware of my needs and ok with Sub Alyson xxxx

my email is subkinkyaly@yahoo.co.uk

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Paragraph breaks should be on purpose, not a random, rare accident. Of course, structure issues aside, the plot is fucking ridiculous. No man worthy of marrying would ever tolerate this shit, so he must be utterly pathetic.

Ridiculous69Ridiculous699 months ago

Your MC, as you describe her, clearly has emotional and mental issues. This story is sick and sad. Grab an abnormal psychology book and you’ll find your MC and the treatment they need to become healthy again. Just nonsense

mioelcidmioelcid9 months ago

Wonderful

5 stars

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

5* stars, yet again! Pray continue, good Sire. The girl is most wanting and in dire need of so much more discipline!!!

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Seems like Pete is on the short end of the stick. I can imagine him being her submissive cuck, in a few months. Time to end things would have been before the last fuck fest. No job, or promotion, is worth it.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Good submissive fantasy. Pete as well as his wife are now under the complete control of May and Rod and will do any thing for them. Why continue it will be repetitive. A conclusion has been reached. No more than 2 stars.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Pete has the perfect wife and boss. Two wonderful couples exploring their deepest desires.

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I am a very amateur writer. For a couple of years I wrote lots of stories just for fun, not showing them to anyone else. While I do make every effort the stories will contain many errors as I am dyslexic.The stories will never win any awards but I hope that many of them will b...