by mindrazor
Hope to read the rest of your story soon. getting me a boner here.... can just imagine all the possibilities... maybe he got lucky, i would want to, Thanks Dario
Great job of building sexual tension. Hope to continue reading the entire series.
Keep writing and keep them naked. Continuous sex isn't needed for a good exhibitionist story.
Very good start. The sexual tension is presented but not as yet acted upon. I await the next chapter