All Comments on 'Carla(4) Beach Fun'

Now that I got to the end of the story, I wish I could recall the name of the female character...

/sarcasm/

Perhaps this story could benefit from fewer mentions of the name 'Carla'. It's a little distracting. I mean no offense, but as I read it, I found myself thinking it looked like a word search where all the words in the word bank were 'Carla'! LOL Thanks for posting your story, though! I love the locale! :-)

I just think that its better to use Carla than SHE