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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

A well written little tale of a classic idea, though having her sister play was a nice twist. The sex scene was just a little lacking in detail and eroticism, and you had a little difficulty getting him to tell the story from his point of view. That may have been easier if one of the girls picked up the story, or if she allowed him to remember it so he could add his feelings.

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