All Comments on 'Carol - Starting a New life'

You seemed to rush through this story. A number of grammatical errors, as well as punctuation errors. The most glaring error was that in the middle of the story, you went right back to the beginning.

very poor English and appalling proof reading.

A wonderful story but was confusing when in middle you seem to restart the story again with no reason given.

thank you for the nice comments very helpful means a lot XOXO