All Comments on 'Caroline Gets Shared Ch. 12'

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AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

This chapter was written in a way that felt like an uncontrolled gang bang. Some might say the story needs more polishing - but if you really think about what is happening - the way you wrote this was just the write tone.

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