All Comments on 'Caroline's Cuckold Family Pt. 03'

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hindsight2020hindsight2020about 3 years ago

Please shoot me!

Oh, wait, better someone shoot her.

mattenwmattenwabout 3 years ago

Amazing and at the same time not believable that there should be well-behaved and educated women who bring so much idiocy among people in writing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I almost fell asleep reading this claptrap story

sarahfamilysarahfamilyabout 3 years agoAuthor

hank you to hindsight2020, mattenw & anonymous for your comments. Could you explain why it was so bad? Was it not sexy enough or was it unrealistic. Help me to improve. I don't suppose you will. You just expect me to disappear....or cry in a corner.

Sarah

RegretsRegretsalmost 3 years ago
Face slapping is not sexy. The cane can be sexy.

The story is failing completely. James is just a drudge in her life. The idea is good, background incidents in a FLM marriage, but inspiration has departed and the beige has descended.

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