All Comments on 'Carol's Fateful Decision Ch. 08'

by TonyMA70

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I have enjoyed most of this story, but I think after this chapter I am not sure if I will read anymore. It has gotten to absurd for me. I know it is just a fantasy story, I think maybe it is just going to quick, maybe Carol should have been a model for awhile before the girls come in to it. I also have a hard time with carol never saying no to Jon about who or how many see her. It has only been three weeks and she was a real conservative woman so it all just happen to quick for her to be as comfortable to even let her next door neighbors son see her.

Pappasleaze!

TonyMA70TonyMA70over 1 year agoAuthor

Thanks for the comment Pappasleaze maybe it's time to end the story. I guess I pushed to protagonist too far in to little time.

Have a great day.

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