by TonyMA70
I have enjoyed most of this story, but I think after this chapter I am not sure if I will read anymore. It has gotten to absurd for me. I know it is just a fantasy story, I think maybe it is just going to quick, maybe Carol should have been a model for awhile before the girls come in to it. I also have a hard time with carol never saying no to Jon about who or how many see her. It has only been three weeks and she was a real conservative woman so it all just happen to quick for her to be as comfortable to even let her next door neighbors son see her.
Pappasleaze!
Thanks for the comment Pappasleaze maybe it's time to end the story. I guess I pushed to protagonist too far in to little time.
Have a great day.