by Frederick Carol
OK. I like the storyline but you just keep going deeper into the mundane. Wear, wash, rinse, dry, repeat. Nothing is changing. Too choreographed. I understand polite, respect & kindness, however, this just keeps reading more like a high society tea party every time they get together. It's time the participants get over what shyness they have & the boys start taking more control of situations & be more aggressive, within respectful norms, especially with their own families. Start some dirty talk. Take mom in the rooms of the house without all of the asking. "What would you like?", "What do you want?". If the moms are really this deep into the game, they will pretty much go for whatever or just say no to the experiments. They have progressed way beyond that at this point. Even have mom's take control at times. More spontaneity. Have the boys declare themselves the men of their own house, with the privileges afforded that position. So many things you could do to spice things up between the club members. Hell, even have the sons declare no birth control when with their own moms or family. Anything to make it not read like an obituary. Only can go 3☆ JMO