by lostopportunity
I enjoyed your commentary after the story more than the story itself. In chapter 5 I stated that I wasn't a fan of the scat scene, I think it was more of that particular scene as this one was more acceptable. still not a fan of it. What I did not see in the last two chapters is that how horney she gets when Cassie humiliates her. I get a writer has to write what they see/feel with a story as well as write what they feel their readers would like and I respect that. This will one scene will in no way stop me from reading your stories as I have enjoyed each one. I can't wait till one day you write a lesbian cuckquean story, I think it would be great. Thanks for writing and thank you for sharing. (your fan)
Always wonderful to hear from readers good and bad and as I have written before some my stories of take turns down dark roads much like life it is in those dark places we find who we really are thanks for reading my works. Love Cheri XOXO