All Comments on 'Castaway Mermaid Pt. 08'

The only thing wrong with the final chapter of this outstanding story is its brevity.

Really enjoyed the entire story. Great work.

For me this story is nowhere near finished. What happened with the mother but more importantly the Retaliation Evan vowed to get. Did his daughter have the abilities of a mermaid . There’s so much more you can have done to this storyline but by the looks of things that won’t happen unfortunately. The other downside of the story pointed out by other readers was two of your chapters were virtually repetitious.. ⭐️⭐️⭐️