All Comments on 'Caught by the Neighbor'

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louiseacdlouiseacd8 months ago

love to find a woman like that

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Great story!!!

rickylaw01rickylaw018 months ago

Very hot story. Loved ir

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Great story hope there is more

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Good premise.

But constant changing between past tense and presence tense is seriously off-putting.

Gave up at bottom of page 1.

Two stars.

SBMichySBMichy8 months ago

Love this story. You need to write more.

boxshelfboxshelf8 months ago

++good.

Pov/names slipped a couple times and could use some general editing but otherwise it worked for me 😉

Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

What a great 5 Star story. Lots of build up with each experience over the week. The "Pegging" on pg. 4 was a surprise I didn't see coming. then wrapped up with a "Creampie" at the end of pg. 5 to finish the story. Awesome job for you 1st. story.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Great story. So hot.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Great story, great writing.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Great story. Lucky lucky man

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Fantastic, one of the best stories I have read in a while five stars well done

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Well done with your punctuation. I am impressed at how Literotica is encouraging the functionally illiterate to attempt writing.

onlyshecumsonlyshecums5 months ago

Great story. Would be better with better paragraph breaks and quotation marks.

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