All Comments on 'Caught in the Act'

Second person, no chapter number, and it's incomplete. This was an easy rating of 1.

In your face and powerful...will be watching for the next chapters

WTF did I just read? As the other anon said No chapters 2d person switching between him and her? Extremely lame sex scene lousy dialogue. Crappy story. Please get help before writing anything else.

No stars

DragonRider55

This story is written as though it is directed to you personally. Imagine yourself as the person who comes home to find his wife having an affair with another woman. Hence the use of 2nd person. There is no chapter number, as I didn't feel it was necessary, as I put "to be continued" at the bottom.

"There is no chapter number, as I didn't feel it was necessary, as I put "to be continued" at the bottom."

On what level does that make sense? A chapter number tells people it's not a complete story and it will be continued BEFORE they open the story. Putting "to be continued" at the end of a story makes as much sense as putting a "Do Not Enter" sign in a room that cannot be read until you are in the room.

Short and to the point! Nice!