All Comments on 'Chapter 05: Sally's Family Goes Natu'

The series has been good, the names are messed up in some places but not a big deal. I wish they'd stop stressing the whole naturist is no sex thing. They say that and are touching each other minutes later. What's the deal with "I have to finish myself" going on? I can understand helping but the concept of someone else not being able to get them off? Just odd to me. Sally went from being uncomfortable with nudity to fantasizing about her husband being blown by her daughter while remembering when her family had sex with each other really fast as well.

One last criticism would be stop the PG boobs penis boner stuff. It feels like you're trying to write two stories at once where it's Cinemax after dark while trying to be Brazzers next movie. I am enjoying the series but please ignore the 60 seconds in heaven pretext and get after it it already.