All Comments on 'Charli Gets Revenge Ch. 02'

I'm in a rebellious mood therefore the boys should stick together and say they are a bundle. It's either both or none of them! *Crosses arms in defiance*.

@talksexytome2029

I've witten the opening to chapter 3 with 3 potential situations. That was the first one I wrote. The boys were best friends for years and now that they have had this (rather extreme) shared experience they have become closer. And Charli is kind of soft, you know, for a kidnapper.

P.s. I want to thank you for your feedback. This is the first time I've ever shared my writing with ANYONE. I chose this story because I had put the least amount of effort into it so if it got negative feedback I could tell myself at least it's not one of the stories I've put a lot of love and care into.

I enjoyed this story, the bi/pansexual nature of it is good. Perhaps expanding on the fantasy you had in the story, one boy fucking the other in chastity and the girl sitting on him. Make the boy in chastity the beta sub.

In any case, please continue, I like the dynamic of a nerdy girl dominating and humiliating 2 guys.

I want Both of them

Notconcerned,

Thank you for your feedback!

I have a vague idea of where the story is going, but I am pretty much going with the idea that both boys are Chali's subs. With Brad having a strong humiliation kink (in addition to his feelings for Ty) and Ty having such a strong desire for praise the majority of the sexual interactions between them will be Brad in submission and Ty dominating him for Charli's entertainment.

It isn't explicitly stated, but I'm writing the character Brad as demisexual and he has had romantic and sexual feelings for Ty for a very long time.

The post sexual moments between them have Ty behaving much more reserved and unsure of his feelings toward Brad, while Brad is much more confident and very well aware of his own feelings toward Ty.

Also, the next chapter may have their first kiss.

I'm ready to read Part 3!!