Charli Gets Revenge Ch. 02

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"Down the hall, second right," she directed.

Brad sat down on the bed, still cradling Charli in his arms.

Ty arrived shortly after, carrying his crate.

"One of you will sleep in my bed tonight," she said. "Which of you wants to sleep in bed with me?"

They both looked at each other. They both wanted to, but only one would be allowed the honor.

(Leave a comment below on who you think should get to sleep with her and why.)

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Claudia69Claudia69over 1 year ago

I'm ready to read Part 3!!

dangerouseroticadangerouseroticaalmost 2 years agoAuthor

Notconcerned,

Thank you for your feedback!

I have a vague idea of where the story is going, but I am pretty much going with the idea that both boys are Chali's subs. With Brad having a strong humiliation kink (in addition to his feelings for Ty) and Ty having such a strong desire for praise the majority of the sexual interactions between them will be Brad in submission and Ty dominating him for Charli's entertainment.

It isn't explicitly stated, but I'm writing the character Brad as demisexual and he has had romantic and sexual feelings for Ty for a very long time.

The post sexual moments between them have Ty behaving much more reserved and unsure of his feelings toward Brad, while Brad is much more confident and very well aware of his own feelings toward Ty.

Also, the next chapter may have their first kiss.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I want Both of them

notconcernednotconcernedalmost 2 years ago

I enjoyed this story, the bi/pansexual nature of it is good. Perhaps expanding on the fantasy you had in the story, one boy fucking the other in chastity and the girl sitting on him. Make the boy in chastity the beta sub.

In any case, please continue, I like the dynamic of a nerdy girl dominating and humiliating 2 guys.

dangerouseroticadangerouseroticaalmost 2 years agoAuthor

@talksexytome2029

I've witten the opening to chapter 3 with 3 potential situations. That was the first one I wrote. The boys were best friends for years and now that they have had this (rather extreme) shared experience they have become closer. And Charli is kind of soft, you know, for a kidnapper.

P.s. I want to thank you for your feedback. This is the first time I've ever shared my writing with ANYONE. I chose this story because I had put the least amount of effort into it so if it got negative feedback I could tell myself at least it's not one of the stories I've put a lot of love and care into.

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