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by KerosPoet

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OmenainenOmenainen4 months ago

Magnificent! And certainly different! Thank you for participating in my event.

joy_of_cookingjoy_of_cooking4 months ago

A tale worthy of Homer. I love the epithets, the euphemisms, the allusions.

ArdentHemingwayArdentHemingway4 months ago

A story most excellent.

I tell you this,

No eternal reward will forgive us now

For wasting the dawn.

-- Stoned Immaculate, Jim Morrison, The Doors

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Very nicely written! At least as crazy as humans be the gods. Still, some semblance of order is the ultimate result. Poor guy pays the price. Thank you for this story.

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The Poet of Keros is a poorly-understood literary figure thought to have written during the fifth century BCE. Occasionally, people translate his works. The best of them may get posted here, from time to time.