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Type “How to write dialogue in English,” in the search box of your search engine.

Follow a few links that the search will throw up. Study them carefully and follow the methods they suggest.

Dialogue in not the only problem with your writing, there are many others, but this will do for a start.

I hope you can come back here with better written and properly formatted stories than the crap you presently write.