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All Comments on 'Cheryl Makes Love to Her Husband'

by MoMiner64Mete

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

way too much "deep inside" you repeat yourself way too much makes it very hard to read

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Editing needed. Submit elsewhere?

Sexy story, but needs editing in a big way.

First person? Third person? Choose one or the other.

MarriageHeat.com would love this story, after editing....

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Very erotic story - well written- needs some editing

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Retired Engineer and technical writer. MM 02/16/22 It has been some time since if I have posted any work to the site but, I hope to start posting more in the very near future. I think there are some of you out there who have been looking for me to resume submitting work to t...