All Comments on 'Choose your own SexVenture Page 06'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Horrible ending - for the sister in brother's body

I feel unsatisfied because for me, the story is incomplete: a) how did the siblings switch bodies/assume the brother is in the sister's body? b) making the choices I did, there seems to be no point to this story, c) what kind of company is this? d) why did Scarlet recommend her brother for this job? e) job seems to be a gofer (in every sense of the word). Strange, downbeat - seems arbitrary for the sister (in brother's body) to die in a freak accident after a strange couple of hours in the office.

PS. BTW, I chose "woman" at the end of page 1.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Great work!

Wasn't sure what to expect. Laughed my ass off at this ending though. Hope I had a nice funeral and my brother enjoys having cramps.

Wish I could vote. It would be 5 stars.

AfetishlovaAfetishlovaover 7 years ago
ouch that's rough

A bit of an unfair ending. So now my bro is stuck in my body and now I'm dead because I didn't want to see sum ho take her clothes off?

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