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by NeoShade

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CreepyDragonCreepyDragonalmost 3 years ago

What a unique fantasy tale! I’m very much looking forward to the next chapters!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Private not privet. Great story so far but needs editing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Not the usual stuff - well thought out and plotted.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

The story shows great potential, as usual. But you should really get yourself a proofreader. Typos and misspelled words break the flow of the story and distract the reader.

As an aside I really liked Inkwell, thank you for taking the time writing the stories.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Confusing!!!

740gordy740gordy9 months ago

A bit herky jerky but very interesting. Has the potential, with a little massaging to be outright fantastic.

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18 yrs... amazing. I will be posting a new series in the coming months.. For all those following me.. thank you. This series will NOT continue any of the work I have on this site or any other... sorry. Years ago I had much planned and saved to be posted continuing on Inkwe...

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