All Comments on 'Claire Ch. 03'

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Anonymousover 2 years ago

Promising story spoiled by dozens of errors which made it difficult to read. Language is for communication : break the flow enough times and the story fails.

seeker76 about 2 years ago

Horrible.

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I am a Good guy that wants to be Bad. The stories I write are about some adventures that my wife and I have had and some that may happen. They are basically true, with some embellishing. My wife can be very adventurous sometimes and surprise me as she has done in the past. I l...

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