All Comments on 'Clara's Sacrifice Ch. 03'

I really enjoy the storytelling, the characters, and the setting. I have to point out, though, that the writing is in desperate need of proofreading. There are numerous omitted words, misspelled words, and misplaced words, enough to become distracting, and detract from the story. This is your creation, please show the readers that you care about it enough to finish the job. We can't care unless you do.

I would like to see Clara get plowed by an orc

Please keep going! I’d love to read Clare acquiring a regular Orc and perhaps a romance from it.