All Comments on 'Club X Ch. 06'

Please finish this story. It's a great one.

Hopefully there's more. Otherwise this ending sucked.

This makes no sense. Why would A bright woman like Lila ignore Heaths instructions and Trust someone is clearly not a friend like Shar?

I know your very busy,I'm sure. I enjoyed reading this series on Heath &Lila. Just curious if you'll get around to letting us in on the endgame? Or is it she just dies??? Thank you for your time and talent.

You're right though, I am busy. Working a day job, and only being able to turn my attention to writing weekends and nights keeps me on my toes. I have started to write the last part of this story, though. But I have a few others I'm working on right now, too. So, hopefully before long, all of them will get an ending, that hopefully you'll all enjoy. Thanks for taking the time to read my work and for being kind enough to leave a comment. I really do appreciate it.

Cheers, SmuttyandFun

Says it’s a 6 part story but doesn’t end in part 6. Needs a conclusion

Really good story, just hope there's more. Pleeease?

The author responded . Said there was more to come . We should take him at his word . Even though these writers owe us nothing . All we have is their word(s) .

Missing the ending.... Does everyone get what's cumming to them?

It has been almost 2 years since the last chapter(6) was posted I need the rest or I'll make my own.

I have just finished the finale to Finally, which should be published soon. I am working on finishing Chapter 7 of Club X as well as One Look and a few others. Sorry for the wait, but life gets in the way of my writing some times. Hopefully this will be out soon, too.

Cheers,

Smuttyandfun

Please, please, please finish this story! It has been so good! And such a terrible cliffhanger...

A conclusion would be appreciated

WTF? Worst ending I've ever encountered.

What. No ending......

No ending.....upset

What the hell kind of ending was that? That story was way too long and too short. Too long in the middle and way too short at the end. Not real believable either. If I paid $20k for a week with someone I don’t think the den keeper gets to tell me what to do with her. She should have used her safe word early and gone home. They’d have to refund Heath his bid and he uses it to pay her debt. This ending felt like you ran out of ideas and so you left us all hanging

It's coming, I promise! I've got Chapter 7 mostly finished, but I'm working on a lot of other stories at the same time. But they will have a conclusion, that hopefully will satisfy all of you have enjoyed this story.

I appreciate the hard work of lit writers. I avoid stories I don’t like. I don’t rate stories I can’t give 5’s.

So it’s a big deal that I gave this a 1 - I picked this story somewhat randomly after seeing your work in Top Stories - I gave it a 1 because you have been promising an ending for 3 years!

I won’t read any more of your stories until I read the last chapter - just to make sure there is one.

Wow I gave it a 5 all the way but we need another chapter just hope heath finds her alive

I’ve given every ch 5 stars when’s ch7 going to appear cuz you can’t leave us hanging with an ending like that

Please hurry with chapter 7

12/27/22

Chapter 7, the finale, has been published today in Romance. And I hope you enjoy it!

Cheers and Happy New Year to All

Smuttyandfun

Although I did put 5 stars it’s bloody terrible to think this sort of thing goes on in real life we’ll done to you