All Comments on 'Club X Ch. 06'

Although I did put 5 stars it’s bloody terrible to think this sort of thing goes on in real life we’ll done to you

12/27/22

Chapter 7, the finale, has been published today in Romance. And I hope you enjoy it!

Cheers and Happy New Year to All

Smuttyandfun

Please hurry with chapter 7

I’ve given every ch 5 stars when’s ch7 going to appear cuz you can’t leave us hanging with an ending like that

Wow I gave it a 5 all the way but we need another chapter just hope heath finds her alive

I appreciate the hard work of lit writers. I avoid stories I don’t like. I don’t rate stories I can’t give 5’s.

So it’s a big deal that I gave this a 1 - I picked this story somewhat randomly after seeing your work in Top Stories - I gave it a 1 because you have been promising an ending for 3 years!

I won’t read any more of your stories until I read the last chapter - just to make sure there is one.

It's coming, I promise! I've got Chapter 7 mostly finished, but I'm working on a lot of other stories at the same time. But they will have a conclusion, that hopefully will satisfy all of you have enjoyed this story.

What the hell kind of ending was that? That story was way too long and too short. Too long in the middle and way too short at the end. Not real believable either. If I paid $20k for a week with someone I don’t think the den keeper gets to tell me what to do with her. She should have used her safe word early and gone home. They’d have to refund Heath his bid and he uses it to pay her debt. This ending felt like you ran out of ideas and so you left us all hanging

No ending.....upset

What. No ending......

WTF? Worst ending I've ever encountered.

A conclusion would be appreciated

Please, please, please finish this story! It has been so good! And such a terrible cliffhanger...

I have just finished the finale to Finally, which should be published soon. I am working on finishing Chapter 7 of Club X as well as One Look and a few others. Sorry for the wait, but life gets in the way of my writing some times. Hopefully this will be out soon, too.

Cheers,

Smuttyandfun

It has been almost 2 years since the last chapter(6) was posted I need the rest or I'll make my own.

Missing the ending.... Does everyone get what's cumming to them?

The author responded . Said there was more to come . We should take him at his word . Even though these writers owe us nothing . All we have is their word(s) .

Really good story, just hope there's more. Pleeease?

Says it’s a 6 part story but doesn’t end in part 6. Needs a conclusion

You're right though, I am busy. Working a day job, and only being able to turn my attention to writing weekends and nights keeps me on my toes. I have started to write the last part of this story, though. But I have a few others I'm working on right now, too. So, hopefully before long, all of them will get an ending, that hopefully you'll all enjoy. Thanks for taking the time to read my work and for being kind enough to leave a comment. I really do appreciate it.

Cheers, SmuttyandFun

I know your very busy,I'm sure. I enjoyed reading this series on Heath &Lila. Just curious if you'll get around to letting us in on the endgame? Or is it she just dies??? Thank you for your time and talent.

This makes no sense. Why would A bright woman like Lila ignore Heaths instructions and Trust someone is clearly not a friend like Shar?

Hopefully there's more. Otherwise this ending sucked.

Please finish this story. It's a great one.