All Comments on 'Coached Pt. 02'

Liked the first one but this one has a really depressing ending.

Keep it going with livvy please.

Love that Olivia has her future dangled in front of her quite explicitly by Shells and still takes the bait! A continuation would be great - really love this scenario of healthy athlete choosing to become a chain smoking, overweight lush

Hard to believe Brian would be much of a success as a coach when his (ahem) track record has him consistently turning his star athletes into overweight chain-smoking bedwetting drunks.

The metamorphosis is interesting,but the setup not very credible.