by Bazzle
Hard to believe Brian would be much of a success as a coach when his (ahem) track record has him consistently turning his star athletes into overweight chain-smoking bedwetting drunks.
The metamorphosis is interesting,but the setup not very credible.
Love that Olivia has her future dangled in front of her quite explicitly by Shells and still takes the bait! A continuation would be great - really love this scenario of healthy athlete choosing to become a chain smoking, overweight lush