All Comments on 'Coming In Ep. 04'

Sweet, well-written continuation of this romance story, but the love scenes are much too short. This is a story that certainly needs to be continued!

I'm happy you like it! This is my first attempt to write this k ind of stuff, including explicit sex scenes, so I'm still figuring stuff out. I'll try to make them longer

Too many mistakes.

@delbruce: Thank you very much for your comment! English isn't my first language and, so far, I have only written conference papers and academic journal articles in English, but no erotic fiction. Since I would love to improve my writing, could you be bothered to point out in more detail the mistakes you found?