All Comments on 'Coming Into His Own Ch. 04'

I took one away because of the micro chapter.

just ask her to call him Thomas?

Chapter 5 is submitted, just waiting for it to appear on the list.

moooorrrrreeeee

Well, yes, Master was a bit out of the blue, but it was just as out of the blue for Thomas. He's still trying to wrap his mind around it -- all while feeling that he's losing his mind at the same time....

Same deal, "master" was out of the blue and made me backread to check it out. Also I NEED that next chapter to find out this Valasztott is.

The jump to being called Master seemed abrupt to me. I also don't remember him saying she belongs to him. I looked at the end of Ch. 03 and it wasn't there. Am I missing something?

I admit I am really enjoying this story, and I cannot wait for further instalments

I can assure you that it will not take another year to get the next chapter up -- it is nearly finished now, and should be up by the end of the month at the latest.

agreed too long a wait but please continue... quicker lol....especially if so short

hope we don't have to wait another year for the next chapter