by eloyal22
Rather implausible
Good first attempt. Keep at it. Maybe a bit more build up next time.
Completely implausible. But hot. Writing this story first-person from her perspective would be even more hot.
Great Start 5 Stars. Please carry on, can't wait for more.
More please
CRAP!
Good story. Chapter 2 please
More
I want to suck your dick like this.
Seems like chapter 1 of a pure wank story.
racist BBC lies and total horseshit.