All Comments on 'Consensual Sex'

by Sunadmire

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JustplainjeffJustplainjeffabout 2 years ago

I think this story deserves more than 750 words. More!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Way too rushed!

SunadmireSunadmireabout 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you Justplainjeff, I may write a longer 'full story' variation.

Anonymous: 750 words doesn't allow for taking it slowly. A 'full story' variation will definitely have a slower feel to it. Keep an eye open...

HornyXhosaHornyXhosaabout 2 years ago

Agree with Justplainjeff. I would love to read a longer version of this story.

CockyTsotsiCockyTsotsi6 months ago

5 stars and favorite! Well done for a 750 word story.

So when will the longer version going to be published? Can't wait to read...

StagOfMzansiStagOfMzansi3 months ago

I can't belive that it is so hot to describe how a white dick ravaged a black pussy in so little words. I agree with the earlier commentors, begging for a longer version. You promised...

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Love to read hot stories with some drama. Got going on a few stories. I try to give it a South African flavour, while keeping it relevant to the international audience. If you like my stories, give it a high score. Enjoy.