All Comments on 'Controlled Actions Ch. 02'

by Freethinker13

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
No thinking going on

By anyone, chararacter or author.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
" She road me"

That's odd, she railroaded me!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Great

Story. Tell her i love her too.

Give us more.

oldbearswitcholdbearswitchalmost 5 years ago
I liked it more than I thought I would. Better than pt 1. Too bad you're getting bombed. Please keep it in cucky, and with hubby not demeaned or cut off

Thanks, Keep going Matey.

Freethinker13Freethinker13almost 5 years agoAuthor
Edit correction

Thank you for catching the miss use of the word "road" it should have been rode. I submitted a correction to replace with the correct usage of the word.

BoomerNYCBoomerNYCalmost 5 years ago
Great read

Ignore the petty grammarians. This was a great read. Hope there’s more to come.

26thNC26thNCover 2 years ago

Grammar be damned, this cuck and whore shit sucks

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