All Comments on 'Controller & slave Pt. 05'

GREAT story one of the best I have read in a while. PLEASE give us a taste of how ANatoly tests Lily Ann

Can we get a follow up with Anatoly and Lily Ann??? Pretty please?

Excellent story. Good, solid writing throughout, and a very interesting premise. I'm curious to see what happens with Mia and how she deals with her new life, but not so much with Lily.

This is one of those I read more for the plot than the porn. In the beginning I thought to myself I ship Tam and Mia, now I'm not sure which is a credit to your writing. I'm curious as to what becomes of those two. At least Mia will have something a kin to her old life. Lily Ann is probably enjoying herself.

This had me horny AND craving the story. Would love to read more about Mia and Lily Anne's future lives

Your story and storyline are great, well written and edited. I look forward to more of your stories. Your thought processes are excellent! Thank you

Excellent story had me hooked the sex scenes were great but I was actually interested in the plot as there was one ure a great writer

C&D

You’re an incredibly gifted writer and I loved the story format, the twists and turns in the story plot were excellent. Your editing is great also, (which is very important to me as bad composition and grammatical errors is as bad as fingernails on a chalkboard…) I thoroughly enjoyed this story! Please continue your exploration of your imagination!